Hello, now I will show you how we have done a team-work in a document of Gmail. We have done a love story of 8 paragraphs divided in 8 groups. Each group, had to write one paragraph and the other groups had to continue with the story. Then, I have done my own work and here you have the result. Click here to see our workthe team-work.
Once upon a time, in a town on the North of Germany called Hoffenheim, there were two boys called Bernard and George. They were in love with each other, but in that era, they weren’t accepted, because people did not accept gay marriages in some countries, and less in European ones. George was a tall and big boy, and George was short and thin. Both of them wanted to marry each other, but their country did not accept it, so they decided to go to another country until they found a country where they would be accepted.
Bernard and George started looking for information about the countries that didn’t punish the homosexual couples. Their hard work gave them a successful result; they found an unknown island in the middle of the Indian ocean called Nobi, that permitted the weddings of homosexual couples. Immediately, they reserved two seats in the first flight with the capital of Nobi as destination.
In Nobi, Bernard and George bought a flat, in the middle of the town, and it was near the sports centre. One day, when they went to the sport scentre, George saw a very attractive boy and he fell in love with him. The name of the man was Doraemon, a very strong man that had a magical pocket. George was all the time looking at him, and when Bernard saw that George was looking at that man he started to get angry.
When they arrived home, they started discussing and arguing, but the argument did not resolve, so Bernard said that he wanted to split up. Bernard went back home, but George went to the sports center the next day and he started by knowing each other. After one month, George went to live with Doraemon. He lived in a mansion because he was an architect and he was very famous in Nobi.
But George was unfaithful, so, he thought that he had to seduce Bernard, and he went to him and he introduced himself. But, Bernard didn’t like George and he got very sad. Suddenly, Bernard repent and he thought that all the people should have a second opportunity and he gave him one. But now George said that he was very hurt and said him no.
George went to his house and he started watching the TV. He was watching a love movie; the protagonist was one boy that cuckold to other boy but at the end of the film the boy that cuckold the other decided to give an another opportunity. George was very sad and he decided to phoned Bernard to give an another opportunity. Bernard accepted and they met in a coffee shop.
The next day, in the coffee shop, Bernard was waiting for George, but he didn’t come. Bernard was very worried and he decided to phone Doraemon but he didn’t take the phone. As he was lonely he decided to go to the sports center, and suddenly he saw Doraemon and George kissing each other while they were having a bath. Bernard got angry and he decided to kill both of them.
He went home to prepare the killing, he thought that the best option was to poison George and Doraemon. He invited them to have dinner and he put poison in the entire chicken. George and Doraemon arrived home and sat in the chairs. Bernard serve the chicken in plates and all of them eat the chicken, when they finished, Bernard tell to George:
-Sorry
-Sorry, why?
Four days later, when the police went to Bernard’s home he saw the three boys died in the floor.
Once upon a time, in a town on the North of Germany called Hoffenheim, there were two boys called Bernard and George. They were in love with each other, but in that era, they weren’t accepted, because people did not accept gay marriages in some countries, and less in European ones. George was a tall and big boy, and George was short and thin. Both of them wanted to marry each other, but their country did not accept it, so they decided to go to another country until they found a country where they would be accepted.
Bernard and George started looking for information about the countries that didn’t punish the homosexual couples. Their hard work gave them a successful result; they found an unknown island in the middle of the Indian ocean called Nobi, that permitted the weddings of homosexual couples. Immediately, they reserved two seats in the first flight with the capital of Nobi as destination.
In Nobi, Bernard and George bought a flat, in the middle of the town, and it was near the sports centre. One day, when they went to the sport scentre, George saw a very attractive boy and he fell in love with him. The name of the man was Doraemon, a very strong man that had a magical pocket. George was all the time looking at him, and when Bernard saw that George was looking at that man he started to get angry.
When they arrived home, they started discussing and arguing, but the argument did not resolve, so Bernard said that he wanted to split up. Bernard went back home, but George went to the sports center the next day and he started by knowing each other. After one month, George went to live with Doraemon. He lived in a mansion because he was an architect and he was very famous in Nobi.
But George was unfaithful, so, he thought that he had to seduce Bernard, and he went to him and he introduced himself. But, Bernard didn’t like George and he got very sad. Suddenly, Bernard repent and he thought that all the people should have a second opportunity and he gave him one. But now George said that he was very hurt and said him no.
George went to his house and he started watching the TV. He was watching a love movie; the protagonist was one boy that cuckold to other boy but at the end of the film the boy that cuckold the other decided to give an another opportunity. George was very sad and he decided to phoned Bernard to give an another opportunity. Bernard accepted and they met in a coffee shop.
He went home to prepare the killing, he thought that the best option was to poison George and Doraemon. He invited them to have dinner and he put poison in the entire chicken. George and Doraemon arrived home and sat in the chairs. Bernard serve the chicken in plates and all of them eat the chicken, when they finished, Bernard tell to George:
-Sorry
-Sorry, why?
Four days later, when the police went to Bernard’s home he saw the three boys died in the floor.
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